NaNoWriMo Day 3: On a roll...
Nov. 3rd, 2009 10:05 pm![[personal profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/user.png){kind=small}
matrixrefugeeI'm hoping to break 10K later tonight:
Finally finished the "Enniel in a bloodstained bedsheet" scene: it turned comedic when Asato stuck his head in to see what was going on: cue one Nephillim slipping to the floor in a dead faint. Also wrote a touching bit between Shinji and Asuka: the fiery redhead has mellowed a bit, but she still calls Shinji an idiot when she's mad at him. There's also an exchange between Asato and Enniel which made me want to beat Enniel bloody with a dictionary (if I can get past that pesky AT Field somehow. Anyone got a small replica Lance of Longinus I can borrow??) since it ended with Enniel coming on to Asato who is 1.) only fifteen (though because he's six-foot-three, Asato looks like he's about twenty) and also 2.) Asato is arguably Enniel's grandson since Sabia's "shell" is derived from Enniel. There again, Grigori tend to have somewhat fluid boundaries when it comes to matters of the flesh, plus this is Evangelion, in which the squicky pairings are somewhat built into the mythos and it doesn't take a lot of imagination to come up with some "oh my..." reactions (the scene with Shinji falling on Rei is funny when it happens, but becomes a moment of Mood Whiplash after you find out later on just where Rei really came from...). Still doesn't keep me from wanting to bash Enniel's head in, so I'm trying to come up with a way to fold, spindle and mutilate him (though he's spent four pages with with a five inch gash in his gut: maybe that's sufficient).
Finally finished the "Enniel in a bloodstained bedsheet" scene: it turned comedic when Asato stuck his head in to see what was going on: cue one Nephillim slipping to the floor in a dead faint. Also wrote a touching bit between Shinji and Asuka: the fiery redhead has mellowed a bit, but she still calls Shinji an idiot when she's mad at him. There's also an exchange between Asato and Enniel which made me want to beat Enniel bloody with a dictionary (if I can get past that pesky AT Field somehow. Anyone got a small replica Lance of Longinus I can borrow??) since it ended with Enniel coming on to Asato who is 1.) only fifteen (though because he's six-foot-three, Asato looks like he's about twenty) and also 2.) Asato is arguably Enniel's grandson since Sabia's "shell" is derived from Enniel. There again, Grigori tend to have somewhat fluid boundaries when it comes to matters of the flesh, plus this is Evangelion, in which the squicky pairings are somewhat built into the mythos and it doesn't take a lot of imagination to come up with some "oh my..." reactions (the scene with Shinji falling on Rei is funny when it happens, but becomes a moment of Mood Whiplash after you find out later on just where Rei really came from...). Still doesn't keep me from wanting to bash Enniel's head in, so I'm trying to come up with a way to fold, spindle and mutilate him (though he's spent four pages with with a five inch gash in his gut: maybe that's sufficient).