Yay, an "A.I.: Artificial Intelligence" fic! -- Wait, it's a clunker...

[matrixrefugee]

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3235535/1/

For starters, the very first chapter features a girl bamfing into the "A.I."-verse from the year 2006 and landing smack in Dr. Hobby's office. And I thought this fandom was bamf-proof.

The summary that proceeds the second chapter alone scares me: When Violet is brought to the year 2159 by Professor Hobby, she makes friends with the handsome mecha Joe, is captured by Johnson-Johnson’s Hounds and is sent on a myriad of adventures, but one thing she wonders, will she ever make it home?

And the author'a protest that they don't write Mary Sues is *really* encouraging. /sarcasm Those that protest that they aren't usually are, but they're in denial. If you're gonna be/write a Sue, please embrace it!

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Re: *blinky blinky blinky*

[matrixrefugee.livejournal.com]

The second chapter didn't actually feature all that: I think she was just trying to give the reader an idea of what to expect in her story....

And I *KNOW* that our Joe would probably find Mary Sues utterly irresistable, just because it's what he does, but I don't wanna see our silicon hottie with those types, just for his (and our) protection.